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Methinks our forefathers
had guts, chased an antelope
down a cliff, cornered a gazelle
into a river, bore
cold.
I just wonder between the world
and us what changed: we sprint half a
and us what changed: we sprint half a
metre and pant like a tadpole before a fall!
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14 comments:
Interesting take on the prompt. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for stopping by Writing with Debra and your comment.
Thank you. Thanks for stopping by here too.
I enjoyed this tremendously. An appreciation for our forefathers is crucial to humanity - in my books at least.
Here is my shot at my maternal ancestry.
http://poemsbyninotaziz.blogspot.com/2010/09/ancient-ones-storytellers.html
@ Ninotaziz, thank you for stopping by. That poem you wrote knocked me off. Brilliant!
dynamic..
love your piece
A++
wonderful!
Luna
http://lunawitch15.wordpress.com
Interesting Input.Liked it!
haha...how true...i think we have become rather coddled...
@ Jingle, thank you. I really appreciate your kind comments.
@ Mia, thank you Luna. I will follow you shortly.
@ UmaAnandane, glad you liked it. :)
@ Brian Miller,thank you for stopping by and your kind comment.:)
Haha - too true
Thank you Dustancarter.
welcome join us again.
will place your link in our blog roll within a week.
super busy these 3 days.
smiles.
I will, Jingle Poetry. I appreciate that. Lovely to be a part of the community. :)
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