Tuesday, 12 April 2011

D)-evolution?

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Methinks our forefathers 
had guts, chased an antelope
down a cliff, cornered a gazelle
 into a river, bore cold.

I just wonder between the world
and us what changed: we sprint half a
metre and pant like a tadpole before a fall!



14 comments:

Debra Ann Elliott said...

Interesting take on the prompt. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for stopping by Writing with Debra and your comment.

Salem Lorot said...

Thank you. Thanks for stopping by here too.

ninotaziz said...

I enjoyed this tremendously. An appreciation for our forefathers is crucial to humanity - in my books at least.

Here is my shot at my maternal ancestry.
http://poemsbyninotaziz.blogspot.com/2010/09/ancient-ones-storytellers.html

Salem Lorot said...

@ Ninotaziz, thank you for stopping by. That poem you wrote knocked me off. Brilliant!

Jingle said...

dynamic..
love your piece

A++

Mia said...

wonderful!

Luna

http://lunawitch15.wordpress.com

UmaAnandane said...

Interesting Input.Liked it!

Brian Miller said...

haha...how true...i think we have become rather coddled...

Salem Lorot said...

@ Jingle, thank you. I really appreciate your kind comments.

@ Mia, thank you Luna. I will follow you shortly.

@ UmaAnandane, glad you liked it. :)

@ Brian Miller,thank you for stopping by and your kind comment.:)

Salem Lorot said...
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dunstancarter said...

Haha - too true

Salem Lorot said...

Thank you Dustancarter.

Jingle Poetry said...

welcome join us again.

will place your link in our blog roll within a week.

super busy these 3 days.

smiles.

Salem Lorot said...

I will, Jingle Poetry. I appreciate that. Lovely to be a part of the community. :)

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