For a prompt of Carry on Tuesday #118
“An eye
for an eye will make the whole world go blind”
-Mahatma
Gandhi
Task: To
use the first five words
* * * *
An eye
for an eye
You see
plucked pupils everywhere
Resented
souls, poisoned intentions
As these
dark sockets find beauty
In the
glaring pupils of the glazed souls
It
irritates, it mocks blindness!
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5 comments:
no it doesn't!
So true :)
quite visual indeed!
For some reason while reading this, I imagine a stomping person. Thanks for sharing. ☺
@ Whitesnake, I will not bedgrudge you your interpretation. It made me look at it from a different angle. Thank you for stopping by.
@ Nara Malone, thank you for your sentiments and for reading the piece.
@ Beccagivens, appreciative for your humbling comment
@ trailsofthepen, you made me re-read the poem and boy, you could be right! Thanks for the comment
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