echoes of the hills: Echoesy Shop

Thursday, 13 September 2012

Echoesy Shop

The hills too are ‘timeworn’

Save for a few scratches on rocks

By cheeky monkeys

The paintings aren’t that bad

Are they, Vicki?

Etsy Shop? No

Echoesy Shop.

9 comments:

Sherry Blue Sky said...: Hee hee, it isnt only the monkeys who are feeling cheeky!!!! I am so happy to see you posting at Poets United!!!!! It has been a while. Happy you are back!!!!!! We missed you!; 13 September 2012 at 19:54
Susie Clevenger said...: I love your take on the prompt. Those first scratches are most interesting art. I love the play on Etsy with Echosy.; 13 September 2012 at 20:34
Ella said...: You are fun! I too like the play on words~
I agree the beginnings of art do set the tone! :D; 13 September 2012 at 21:53
Eileen T O'Neill ..... said...: Salem,

I like the natural timeworn thoughts with your words. The erosion of time and the disappearing sounds....Beautiful and real:)

Eileen; 14 September 2012 at 01:32
Mary said...: Welcome 'home,' Salem! What a clever poem you have shared here. I love 'echoesy,' which made me smile broadly!; 14 September 2012 at 04:53
Vicki Sheehan said...: silly monkeys! nice poem :); 14 September 2012 at 09:28
Sarav said...: Very clever words and I love the scratches from the monkeys--they are so wild and reckless :-); 14 September 2012 at 14:04
rch said...: Very funny wordplay, enjoyed greatly.; 14 September 2012 at 14:29
echoesofthehills said...: Thank you so much fellow poets for your kind words. I loved the prompt and reading your takes on it was an inspiring one.

Love,
echoesofthehills.; 19 September 2012 at 03:55

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