Thursday, 13 September 2012

Echoesy Shop

The hills too are ‘timeworn’
Save for a few scratches on rocks
By cheeky monkeys
The paintings aren’t that bad
Are they, Vicki?
Etsy Shop? No
Echoesy Shop.


Sherry Blue Sky said...

Hee hee, it isnt only the monkeys who are feeling cheeky!!!! I am so happy to see you posting at Poets United!!!!! It has been a while. Happy you are back!!!!!! We missed you!

Susie Clevenger said...

I love your take on the prompt. Those first scratches are most interesting art. I love the play on Etsy with Echosy.

Ella said...

You are fun! I too like the play on words~
I agree the beginnings of art do set the tone! :D

Eileen T O'Neill ..... said...


I like the natural timeworn thoughts with your words. The erosion of time and the disappearing sounds....Beautiful and real:)


Mary said...

Welcome 'home,' Salem! What a clever poem you have shared here. I love 'echoesy,' which made me smile broadly!

Vicki Sheehan said...

silly monkeys! nice poem :)

SaraV said...

Very clever words and I love the scratches from the monkeys--they are so wild and reckless :-)

rch said...

Very funny wordplay, enjoyed greatly.

echoesofthehills said...

Thank you so much fellow poets for your kind words. I loved the prompt and reading your takes on it was an inspiring one.


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