Thursday, 13 September 2012

Echoesy Shop


 
The hills too are ‘timeworn’
Save for a few scratches on rocks
By cheeky monkeys
The paintings aren’t that bad
Are they, Vicki?
Etsy Shop? No
Echoesy Shop.

9 comments:

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Hee hee, it isnt only the monkeys who are feeling cheeky!!!! I am so happy to see you posting at Poets United!!!!! It has been a while. Happy you are back!!!!!! We missed you!

Susie Clevenger said...

I love your take on the prompt. Those first scratches are most interesting art. I love the play on Etsy with Echosy.

Ella said...

You are fun! I too like the play on words~
I agree the beginnings of art do set the tone! :D

Eileen T O'Neill ..... said...

Salem,

I like the natural timeworn thoughts with your words. The erosion of time and the disappearing sounds....Beautiful and real:)

Eileen

Mary said...

Welcome 'home,' Salem! What a clever poem you have shared here. I love 'echoesy,' which made me smile broadly!

Vicki Sheehan said...

silly monkeys! nice poem :)

SaraV said...

Very clever words and I love the scratches from the monkeys--they are so wild and reckless :-)

rch said...

Very funny wordplay, enjoyed greatly.

echoesofthehills said...

Thank you so much fellow poets for your kind words. I loved the prompt and reading your takes on it was an inspiring one.

Love,
echoesofthehills.

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