this river flows,
Pilgrim, down
to daraja mungu, the
bridge of God.
upstream, the rushing
waters chocked between rocks
some parted under the
sturdy roots of mukuyu, the baobab
others, in a moment of
youthful folly, broke banks
as if, like fish, they
could live on dryland
so, the cool waters
thus flow
many a drunkard tested
their levels
not with sticks but
their knees
the small curls,
sensual yet unbridled
deep mangroves roots
held tight
where this river
leads, pray pilgrim,
we might not know;
yet, it holds such
depth of conviction
Poem shared with: Magpie Tales
17 comments:
What an absolutely beautiful poem, from this image....I love all of the African names of tree and vegetation......baobab, and mukuyu.......sigh.
Wowzers, you have a huge following on Twitter, fellow pilgrim!!!!!! Cool! I dont tweet. The intricacies of cell phones are beyond me, never mind tweeting and twittering..........the birds in my brains do enough of that:)
You have an insight of the river that has many layers. Great words, thanks .
Utterly beautiful! I love the title as well! Brilliant writing Salem!!
Deep and beautiful...lots of lovely word textures here...
whew...that second stanza is powerful...this pilgrim is praying...smiles...
This is lovely ... gently unfolding, flowing.
I could sense the waters flowing round my knees - wishful thinking! LOL
Thanks Koko. I will be teaching you them bit by bit.
Ha ha ha, Koko. I will be your good ambassador on that front. Smiles.
Thanks @Kutamun. Welcome to these sacred hills.
You are welcome, @Currie Burtt. There is a bridge by that name in my village.
Thanks a lot, @Tess Kincaid. Thanks for the prompt. Great work you are doing. :)
Brian Miller, thanks a lot of dropping by. If there ever is somebody who has taken commenting platform to a whole new level, then it is you! I appreciate this.
Thanks, @Helen. Welcome to these sacred hills. Smiles.
Much humbled, @Trellisimo. Thanks for making the maiden pilgrimage here.
seems like whole world is a pilgrimage and such a holy palce to live
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