Tuesday, 17 November 2015

through the slit of a cat's pair of eyes


through the slit of a cat's pair of eyes
many a dream was born
the window: a vantage point for oft-unpondered sights
through the slit of a cat's pair of eyes
a cat looks at the host, a stranger yet a friend
flurry of thoughts, away from the couches
through the slit of a cat's pair of eyes
a cat may step outside of himself, sighs.

C) Lorot Salem/echoesofthehills 2015

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Note by Poet: My experiment with Triolets.
 
Photo Credit: Magpie Tales


11 comments:

Berowne said...

Clever and very well done.

Salem Lorot said...

Thank you Berowne.

Sherry Blue Sky said...

This is very cool. And I am thrilled that you are writing.

Kutamun said...

So mysterious , they are

Carol Campbell said...

Very cat like response! Excellent!

Helen said...

I like this! Cats are mysterious and full of magic.

Noirfifre said...

That is an all seeing cat :P.

Salem Lorot said...

Thank you so much Koko @Sherry Blue Sky, @Kutamun, @Carol, @Helen and @Noirfifre.

Your kind comments are highly appreciated. :)

Kay said...

I love the repetition here..gorgeous words

Kathleen said...

I love the repetition, too! Inspiring me to think about giving that a try with the next prompt. No promises, though.

Cat-tails: here be wagging tales said...

Ah, but cats can be such jerks, can't they? They think too much of themselves, as if they imagine they're tigers or dangerous lions on the prowl instead of fat and fluffy powder puffs. :)

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