Exit
Limericks. Enter Triolets!
This
poetry form (pronounced tree-o-lay), a French verse form, has its features as:
8 a) 8 lines
T b) 2 rhymes
5 c) 5 of the 8 lines are
repeated or are refrain lines
d) First line repeats at
the 4th and 7th lines
e) Second line repeats at
the 8th line
It
is due to the repetition of the first line at the 4th and 7th
line that the triolet gets its name.
The
triolet’s rhyme scheme is ABaAabAB.
An
example:
How Great My Grief
By Thomas Hardy
How
great my grief, my joys how few,
Since
first it was my fate to know thee!
-
Have the slow years not brought to view
How
great my grief, my joys how few,
Nor
memory shaped old times anew,
Nor loving-kindness helped to show thee
How
great my grief, my joys how few,
Since first it was my fate to know thee?
That
is enough.
In
celebrating MASHUJAA DAY (A Kenyan National Holiday to celebrate her heroes) to
be held tomorrow, the 20th of October 2011, dear reader please
accept this amateurish poems.
Quotes
to set you off:
"Our children may learn about the heroes of the
past. Our task is to make ourselves the architects of the future."
-Jomo
Kenyatta, first president of Kenya, from an address given on Kenyatta Day, as
quoted in Anita King's Quotations in Black, Greenwood Press 1981.
"There is something about safari life that makes
you forget all your sorrows and feel as if you had drunk half a bottle of
champagne - bubbling over with heartfelt gratitude for being alive. One only
feels really free when one can go in whatever direction one pleases over the
plains, to get to the river at sundown and pitch one's camp, with the knowledge
that one can fall asleep beneath other trees, with another view before one, the
next night."
- Karen Blixen
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Ee Mungu Nguvu Yetu
Ee
Mungu Nguvu Yetu, we sing in the anthem,
Ilete
Baraka kwetu, we call upon blessings
To
rent the air of Kenya’s majesty
Ee
Mungu Nguvu Yetu, we sing in the anthem,
Venerating
our Heroes for their homogeneity
Harambee!
Harambee! We chant without blemish
Eee
Mungu Nguvu Yetu, we sing in the anthem
Ilete
Baraka kwetu, we call upon blessings
Notes:
Ee Mungu Nguvu Yetu-
Words extracted from the National Anthem of Kenya which translate to “O God of
All Creation”.
Ilete Baraka Kwetu-
Words from the National Anthem. Bless this Our Land and Nation.
Harambee-
A historical word in Kenya used to call upon people to come together for a
common cause. It was commonly used by the former presidents of Kenya.
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Dear Forgotten (S)hero Lurking in the Shadows
Dear
forgotten (s)hero lurking in the shadows
I
got your crumbled letter in a dustbin
Rotting
away in waste of greed
Dear
forgotten (s)hero lurking in the shadows
Now
a forbidden fragrance amid filth
What
is an artificial statue worth in Patrio-meter?
Dear
forgotten (s)hero lurking in the shadows
Echoes
of the hills will make your names sanguine
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When
God created Kenya, He spoke thus:
“Let
us create Mara, the Maasai and Mombasa”
And,
having created them, He said it was good
When
God created Kenya, He spoke thus:
“Now
let us populate her with people most good”
Then
God dotted it with wonderful vegetation and landscapes
When
God created Kenya, He spoke thus:
“I
envy Mara, the Maasai and Mombasa”.
Echoes of the Hills wishes all Kenyans a Happy Mashujaa Day. Let all (S)heroes celebrated and uncelebrated be in our thoughts. More importantly, let us strive to be (s)heroes in the small things in life because it is the humility in the small and obvious that we are magnified to the big and not-so-obvious.
2 comments:
Using triolets to describe your country is very creative. Refrains work very well when you try to characterise someone or something. I like 'Of the Mara, Masaai and Mombasa' especially. It has a great flow.
'Dear Forgotten Hero' is an interesting idea to play around with.
Great to see you experimenting!
Thanks for your observation and comment @Madhumakhi. Yes, I am having a field day with this experimenting thing.
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