Tuesday 17 November 2015

through the slit of a cat's pair of eyes


through the slit of a cat's pair of eyes
many a dream was born
the window: a vantage point for oft-unpondered sights
through the slit of a cat's pair of eyes
a cat looks at the host, a stranger yet a friend
flurry of thoughts, away from the couches
through the slit of a cat's pair of eyes
a cat may step outside of himself, sighs.

C) Lorot Salem/echoesofthehills 2015

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Note by Poet: My experiment with Triolets.
 
Photo Credit: Magpie Tales


10 comments:

Berowne said...

Clever and very well done.

Salem Lorot said...

Thank you Berowne.

Sherry Blue Sky said...

This is very cool. And I am thrilled that you are writing.

Kutamun said...

So mysterious , they are

Carol Campbell said...

Very cat like response! Excellent!

Helen said...

I like this! Cats are mysterious and full of magic.

Noirfifre said...

That is an all seeing cat :P.

Salem Lorot said...

Thank you so much Koko @Sherry Blue Sky, @Kutamun, @Carol, @Helen and @Noirfifre.

Your kind comments are highly appreciated. :)

Kay said...

I love the repetition here..gorgeous words

Kathleen said...

I love the repetition, too! Inspiring me to think about giving that a try with the next prompt. No promises, though.

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